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| Idea/visual Presented for feedback |
ISSUES RAISED
-The current character illustration looks too similar to Harry Potter, define the character from the competition.
The shape of the glasses will be altered and the clothing will be altered to steer away from a Harry Potter Style.
-Diary on the spine is misspelt
This will be changed, spelling checks will be carried out for the final design.
-Question raised as to whether the character would wear red glasses.
Research glasses from the time period that teenagers would wear. Find any direction within the book.
ACTIONS TO BE TAKEN
-Develop the jumper, try some textures.
-Try an analog approach, physically make the illustration.
-Experiment with previous idea to show faces going through emotions/experiences
-Try a minimal style e.g. just definitive features such as glasses and spots.
GENERAL FEEDBACK
-The front and back could mirror each other to demonstrate mood swings/changing personality
-Handwritten text is cliche for a diary entry book, explore type further.
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